With Ali's luck, he'll probably get in the car with a psycho...or get sold off somewhere. But at least he's moving on...? I liked Saul in all his angriness. :P (And, yes, my reading spree continues! I realized there were a lot of your stories I hadn't read yet and decided that needed to be rectified! :D)

Woah... Harsh ending. I was hoping - god was I hoping! - that he would leave that arse! Run away! Find someone else!

Ahh shame... But so brilliant. Tragedies are always brilliant :D

Mou...Saul seemed so sweet at times, then he was so mean!

But some stars do shine! They shine as long as someone makes them shine. As long as people are there for them! :3

I like Saul too.
He definitely was a beautiful star.

this is amazing
the ending almost made me cry
poor ali saul having to die :(
nice job though

I love this story o_o a lot, it was amazing. :D


yay.

why are u so talented at writing sad stuff?

This was beautiful, in a star falling kind of way. It was pretty blurry, the entire thing, and I liked the effect that gave. Nice job!

hi its cookie aka walking in beauty ...first off i love your writing i always have. this is your best yet atleast in my opinion. I love the way that we get to know both people even tho one doesnt have a "real" name. Great job.

Happy birthday

I liked this, the extencve use of metaphore and such is most pleasing. Anther perfect score on my charts

hah, my birthday is july 2nd too
very soon


anyhow, pretty imagery
but sad nontheless

That´s was beautiful. And so sad. In some parts it felt like a song... I loved it :)

AAH !! Happy Birthday !! And, here's a b'day present - a review! Lol, nothing more I can give, can I? *sniff*

This story was extremely beautifully written, and its tragic ending just makes it even more of that... I love what you've written about falling stars, and this story... wow, am near to tears it has touched my heart so deeply XD

It was a good story and I found myself liking Saul more than Ali for some reason.

Very intense, enjoyed this very much!