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| Vintor 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseWoah... Harsh ending. I was hoping - god was I hoping! - that he would leave that arse! Run away! Find someone else! Ahh shame... But so brilliant. Tragedies are always brilliant :D |
| BrdomIsTheDvl 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseMou...Saul seemed so sweet at times, then he was so mean! But some stars do shine! They shine as long as someone makes them shine. As long as people are there for them! :3 |
| Let. Me. Fly. 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI like Saul too. He definitely was a beautiful star. |
| explosion of planes 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing the ending almost made me cry poor ali saul having to die :( nice job though |
| trrrrrrrrrrrrrrrwtft no. 2007-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story o_o a lot, it was amazing. :D yay. |
| Emmy 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewhy are u so talented at writing sad stuff? |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful, in a star falling kind of way. It was pretty blurry, the entire thing, and I liked the effect that gave. Nice job! |
| cookie 2007-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusehi its cookie aka walking in beauty ...first off i love your writing i always have. this is your best yet atleast in my opinion. I love the way that we get to know both people even tho one doesnt have a "real" name. Great job. Happy birthday |
| Rhapsody's Shadow 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, the extencve use of metaphore and such is most pleasing. Anther perfect score on my charts |
| Aquafied 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abusehah, my birthday is july 2nd too very soon anyhow, pretty imagery but sad nontheless |
| magalina 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThat´s was beautiful. And so sad. In some parts it felt like a song... I loved it :) |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseAAH !! Happy Birthday !! And, here's a b'day present - a review! Lol, nothing more I can give, can I? *sniff* This story was extremely beautifully written, and its tragic ending just makes it even more of that... I love what you've written about falling stars, and this story... wow, am near to tears it has touched my heart so deeply XD |
| Sakru angelqueen 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseIt was a good story and I found myself liking Saul more than Ali for some reason. |
| KD 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery intense, enjoyed this very much! |
| Love Eternally 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseAw. So bitter sweet. I actually loved this. although i kept getting lost on the way ali thinks. happy birthday to you both! |