I like the last line of this poem. It makes me think back to my Stony Memoirs poem... ah but this review is about your particular piece of work. It tells me things I've heard often... and it is true. Although there are lighter sides to this thing we call life, there could and should be more good. We can all do better... what with all the crime, racism, and complete malice, ambition and greed. Yes... Bush could have done better dealing with the matters of the war in Iraq, as well as the eternal war here. I could do a better job staying focused on what I need to do. I could do a better job having a social life, but life is simply what we choose to do with it. It's just with all the stress I face in trying to stay successful, going to college, and publishing my stories, it's easier for me to see the darker side of life, especially with no one to hang out with. I wish we were perfect, but everyone has their flaws. I suppose that's what makes us human. Anyway, this is a great poem, keep it up!

No... kidding. though there isn't much I can do about it. At least it describes the whole feeling (you know what I'm referring to I'm sure, cuz I'm not saying here). Uhh... ah great I forgot the rest of what I was gunna say.

There's a bright side of things? HAHAHAHA. Oh. You changed your name. Again. And you tried to accuse me of being the bad guy. I've only changed my name... well, I changed it back a few times.. so.. about 10 times. Good job on the poem. I have to do dishes. WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO?

although i dont accept the message of the poem i did like the sceme of it