|Reviews for False Expectation|
| Basara 7/3/07 . chapter 1
| Chidori Nadare 6/30/07 . chapter 1
"...I am still first place overall." It could be taken literally or interpret another meaning. Another intriguing and great haiku.
P.S I know what you mean about the fragment in the last line. Thanks for telling me.
| a silenced revolution 6/28/07 . chapter 1
Thought-provoking... It sounds shallow to me on the surface, but I think I can interpret it as having a metaphorical meaning. Intriguing.
| Gray Angel 6/28/07 . chapter 1
Very nice short one, and very true.
| openmouthblues 6/28/07 . chapter 1
Interesting, for a haiku.
I'm still wondering what it's about.