clearly understood...

nice...

"...I am still first place overall." It could be taken literally or interpret another meaning. Another intriguing and great haiku.

-C.N

P.S I know what you mean about the fragment in the last line. Thanks for telling me.

Thought-provoking... It sounds shallow to me on the surface, but I think I can interpret it as having a metaphorical meaning. Intriguing.

Very nice short one, and very true.

Interesting, for a haiku.

I'm still wondering what it's about.

-Icicle Tears