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| Carmel March 2007-10-06 ch 3, | abuseSorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :) I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them. I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;) ~Carm~ |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseThis is good! UPDATE! Is he like gonna kill her or somethin?? |
| Carmel March 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseWow. This is a truly wonderful story. Your descriptions are fantastic, They just let the reader see into this whole world you've created. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps you interested throughout the entire read. Like I said, truly wonderful. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more :) ~carm~ |