That was awesome. I'm so glad that you updated! This is just so crazy...and is that other motorcycle guy going to reappear you know the one whose bike she wrecked? Please update again soon!

HAHAHAHAHAH ,
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS !
it's so funny & entertaining .
i literally laughed out loud .
especially, when kayla's at the bar crrying about her problems to the random guy .

I've really enjoyed reading this story so far, I like how the story flows and the humour is just perfect. Am looking forward to seeing how the story goes.

lol, hilarious been a while since i read a well written story that was funny

I love this story! I'm so glad you updated it after such a long time!:)

My goodness! I'd pretty much given up on you ever updating this again, but I'm so stoked that you have come back with a fifth chapter. I re-read the whole story again, and laughed as much as I did the first time round so the gap has been good in a way as I'd forgotten some of the funniness.

I know I would have said this to you before, but it's brilliant to read something Australian. The speed limits make sense and the people seem more believable (strange as that may seem what with all the gun pulling and unprofessional policemen!). Bobby is so annoying, but in a really endearing sort of way. I'm looking forward to hearing what he's taken from the scary people/ what he has that the scary people want.

I hope you update again soon, I've really enjoyed reading this again and (true to form) I have Unsent Letter stuck in my head. Oh and I went to see Hawks play yesterday...probably less said about that the better, huh?

Nice story so far! Keep up the good work!

i love this story, its like a crazy comedy movie.
also, yay for a story set in aus!
but hey, in an earlier chapter you had officer stanley ask for license and registration - thats an americanism! our rego's are the stickers on our windshields :p

keep up the good work luv! looking forward to more crazy adventures

*rolls on the floor* This is so awesome! There's not enough reviews! You totally killed my sides laughing my ass off and it's only four chapters so far.

Kayla has the worse luck ever. Lol. And I love the fact that she goes Hulk on everyone at the slightest mention of being a girlfriend to the teenage pervert. I can't wait till she meets with the sexy biker much less what other bad luck she'll encounter. Who the hell did she piss off in another life??!! It must be Bobby though. 20 dollars is a lot for a week but definitely not enough. Haha.

Love the story please update soon!

This story is absolutely brilliant. I love it more every time I read it. Well done.

aw, that poor girl! i would hate to have her kind of day... it's bad enough seeing an old man totally naked running through your hotel lobby drunk at 3 a.m. lol.

Wow. Very impressive! Very entertaining. I love it.

ohmygosh... poor Kayla... xD what a horrible day she just had. if that was me, id never want to live ever again XD.
Kayla's so funny. Not to mention the grandma. Hahaha.
I'm really hoping you can update soon. I'm so curious in what 's happening next. Good Luck ^_^

I was just thinking about this story yesterday and wondering when you were going to update and lo and behold you did. I'm very glad!

I love her stiletto stabbing episode. And that she bounced around knocking people to the ground so much; first Brute, then Roy, then Bobby down the staircase!

I hope the next chapter is up soon although I really, honestly sympathise with just not being able to update. I'm having a very dry spell at the moment. Whenever you can update I'll be here reading it!

Cheers, Jess

ah! you updated.
and i was not disappointed.
that was just so funny.
lmao.
and hopefully the biker, the cute one that is, will show up soon.