Wow, very nice. I loved it. Great ending :)

-Looks a little shocked- Well, now... yeah, you can say you're the first person who's ever written something that's made me afraid of it in some way... haha.XD

That was great, though... the imploding part honestly scared me.XDBut... the side effects part was halairious.XD(I can't spell.) That was so awesome, though... heehee.X3 ^^

ew. Divine- Insanity? That's your penname? Is there a story behind it? Or did you just pick it randomly??

~Kat :)

I actually inspired this? cool, Love all your stories, especially when we share ideas we have for them. Who said horror cant have humor thrown in:)

That was pretty good...I loved the end

hahaha, luv it :D, put a smile on my face lol
"may cause side effects" xD great ending line.
Love the description, very nice and gorey (as you tend to do :D).
I tend not to read/write short stories.. dunno why, but most arnt very satisfying.. but this ones great it starts with a simple charactor+plot, builds it up adds a nice joke in there and ends.. brilliant :) hehe,

A model for all short story (horror-ish) writers

all da best x cya
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Wow...

That was very interesting.

I'm afraid of asprin now.

Interesting, I like the idea. Sounds horrible, I'm glad I don't get migraines!
"I got to my feet, but my I began to lose balance". Take out the second "my".
"I sat on the edge of my bed, my head in my hands; why wouldn’t this throbbing pain go away?" I think it would sound better if instead of putting in a semi colon, just end the sentence and start a new one. Either that or put "I sat on the edge of my bed with my head in my hands; why wouldn't this throbbing pain go away?" It's the first sentence, you don't want to have too many breaks or it puts the reader off.
I think it's a good story, well described. Keep it up!