Really nice story to bad your not posting it. But oh well I wish you all the luck in the world. And don't forget that writing about something its creating a new world to everyone imagination. Take care! ^_^

I think someone is falling in love!

This story looks interesting and a bit funny, it reminds me of my gay friend.

Hehehe... I like Shelby... She's funny!

O, I have a feeling that this story is going to be great! Can't wait for more!

heeheh... it's so much fun... well I laugh when Shelby said nope, intensive care... it hit me really nicely...and I'm enjoying this so much... so pls update and continue this...

Really interesting!!
You're really coming up with something new here, Out of the ordinary. We readers need more of this, New unexpected ideas that leaves us excited for the next chanter. I hope you continue writing it!
You asked for reviews on weather you should continue or not? Will you have my vote. But seeing as you haven't updated in while maybe you desided to stop. I'll keeping hoping youll change your mind and continue someday...

:D I love it. Please continue.

I love the narrator's voice, by the way. It's like Mark is telling me his story and stops here and there for clarifications and commentary. :)

Update soon?

Let me tell you right now that you should defenitely continue this. I love it. I can't explain it but its something about the way its written. I feel like mark is talking directly to me...like were friends...a sort of 'Catcher in the Rye' vibe...you know? Anyway, plz continue.

Hi! Interesting concept you got here. The summary thingy was kinda confusing, but I was like wtf let's give it a try. I think it's got a lot of potential, so keep it up : )

good start to this story. i'm wondering though are you writing in present tense or past. b/c it gets confusing u switch back and forth. i suggest, and please don't hate me i'm only giving advice, that u stick with one. i want to read more, so update again. i promise u that i'll be a faithful reviewer if u contiue on this story. well good story. bye