nice chapter! update soon!

good story so far, update soon!

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I am loving it.

Very nice beginning. I liked it. It gave a good description of all the new characters and helped the reader feel settled in with the way the main character talked to her family. Very good with that, however a few sentences here and there were rather confusing. like "his sandy blonde hair fell was cut short...". I think it was supposed to be "his sandy blonde hair was cut...". There were a few other mistakes but not many. Overall good work and keep writing!

yea this story is nicee..continue to write hors!

Loved the story, keep workin' on it.

How fun (tis my word for cool :D)! I really like this story. It was a short chapter (longing for more!), but I really liked it. Great start! I love Evan's name :) Awesome again! Update soon!

Halani

O, I like this! Very good, update son!

pretty good so far

i woulda freaked if sum stranger saw me changing mi clothes!

update soonn

Nice start. Kinda short, but still a nice start for this story. Update soon. ...Snow

Evan as a girl's name? Interesting.

Good background you put in for Evan. Her interaction with Caleb was believable and fun. I'm looking forward to see where this will go next, so be sure to post the next chapter soon. I'm putting you on my alert.