very pretty. i am not extremely familiar with greek mythology, but your poem has a nice rhythm to it. well done

T'is me again.

I love this. I like how you used Greek Gods in your poetry. It was quite interesting..

And I couldn't submit another review for your 2nd chapter on 'Of Variables, Frisbees, & Basketballs.' So I opted to review it here. xD Anyway, again, more interaction is needed. You didn't elaborate enough on Tina coming to the house in the morning for tutoring. There needs to be a more in-depth look into the characters. It's alright to use the typical cliches, but you gotta change it up a bit.

Um, and that's about it. =)
Just Breathing
AKA Steph from Reviewer's Found

I loved it!! I really did! I like the whole Greek mythology theme going on. Very different. And some even rhyme good job. It's a lot better then the stuff I've tried to rhyme. I'm a sucker for romance and it swept me off my feet.

That was absolutely beautiful. I loved the detail and the pattern you used. Good job :)

This is interesting, I'm not sure if I'm into the whole greek gods/goddesses the way you're using them though. But it is interesting nonetheless.