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Reviews For: On the Run

Cthulhu Is An Awesome God 2008-04-09 ch 4,	abuseI hadn't read this for a while, and I liike the way the story is going. The banter between the two bounty hunters is very good, and I like the familial relationship between Abigail and her sister. I think you ought to introdouce some gunfighting soon, though. I am looking forward to seeing Silas and Wyatt in action, particulary after hearing how Wyatt was with Quantrill's Raiders.
SummerWind88 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseGood start. It's been awhile since I found anything worth reading on here.
Jenny Van Alles 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseGreat start - excellent characterization!
cabloob 2007-09-15 ch 3,	abusesweet! cant wait for more! i finally posted the beginning of mine, check it out if you have time, please!
Le Meg 2007-09-11 ch 3,	abuseAh, motive. Gotta love it. There were a couple of typos here and there, not enough to derail the story or anything, but on the whole it was well done. I especially liked this bit: "It hadn’t been hard to convince him to spend the night with her. And after that night, it sure wasn’t hard to spend a few more." Great play on words, very casual but telling. Silas' knowing silences are great, and I'm sure it'll only get more interesting once they get to Nevada and the two meet up.
Le Meg 2007-09-07 ch 2,	abuseSo far so good! In both character introductions I think you did a pretty good job of setting up their respective lifestyles while allowing plenty of room for more of their histories to be unearthed and personalities developed. I love westerns (working on one myself!) and it's always refreshing to get someone else's take on the great frontier, and all that. ;] It'll be interesting to see where the story goes, since right now there are a whole bunch of opportunities avaliable. Cheers!
cabloob 2007-08-30 ch 2,	abuseWhoa, this is a really well done story. It looks like you know a lot about western times. anyway, good job. i can't wait for more!
Cthulhu Is An Awesome God 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseThat was a good opening, and I liked the world-weary bounty hunters and the heist pulled out by the gem-stealing saloon girl. A few questions, though. Silas Liberty sounds like the name of a freed slave. Silas is a typical biblical name given to slaves, and African American slaves who were freed by the Civil War would get to choose their own last names, often stuff like Freeman, or Liberty, but he's riding with an ex-confederate, and it's never mentioned that he's black. A better physical description of the two main charachters would be nice, but other than that, I think you've done a fine job and look forward to hearing more soon.

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