that was beautiful... all your words and all the feelings each line conveyed. everything was perfectly placed together.

I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot.

Oh, that is beautiful. I can't believe I haven't read anything of yours before. I'll be adding you to my favorites, that is for sure. I loved "our skin moves in improvised patterns across the room." That's so interesting. Really beautiful poem. Keep writing! :)

I like the second stanza the most - that, and the last line. loads of awesome.

Wow. Wow wow wow. Very nice!
*applauds*
Definitely one of the diamonds.:) (remember we had that rating system?)

Kat