interesting.. nicely written.. i like the ending

It had a nice meaning to it...

The words were chosen wisely...

I read your first Haiku, and then read your latest one...

You have improved greatly since your first Haiku...
I'm impressed.

Write soon and never give up..

~Godchild

true in both ways...

nice...

Cool and interesting. I like it! Love is undecided sometimes... Unless I'm misunderstanding, the lover and slave are the same person, but the person is undecided who they are. They give and take, but don't know what to do because they're confused. It's like the person almost has alter egos or personalities through the confusion in change. Even if I just saw something different in the haiku, love does change. Great job!

Write on!!

'Shapeshiting love' is nice. It reminds me of movie I watched before. Nice haiku.


-C.N