Aw, that was really cute. I loved it.

konban wa

The night is hot and stuffy thanks to summer, but I'm suddenly very, very cold after reading this. *shiver* It sounded so beautifully haunting . . . "Twinkle, twinkle, my little star" . . . Oh yes, ever so haunting. Especially "But don't you cry, my little star" and "Shh... little girl don't you cry."

*shiver*

Nicely done. Exceptional. More than exceptional - beautiful. Wonderful. Shivers-up/down-my-spine. Absolutely, breath-takingly, gorgeously perfect. :)

Please, PLEASE write more soon
-Shan-

Okay, that was like ubercreepy. It wasn't scary but it wasn't just weird.

This is actually very, very good. You come on strong and you leave just as powerful, maybe more so.

Good work.
~Lee