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| gnomesbeatfaeries 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. Let me savor the amazingness of this poem for a minute. Wow. Okay, on with the review. Although this poem, with it's hints of heroes and medievel chains initially draws the reader back into fairytale land, it is fairly obvious by the end that this poem is quite modern. I just love how you pull in so many issues, freedom of speech, for one. I am also in love with your last stanza, its so perfect! I hope to see more of these amazing poems, michelle |
| Dante's Disciple 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseVery good, and I love the hell bit at the end. Its good to see such a villainous (and slightly funny) poem on here, good rhymes too :) |