|Reviews for Red Wine Vinegar|
| bittersweet.season 7/4/07 . chapter 1
oh, i just loved this. the originality of it. excellent firt and last lines, and the body was just so, ugh, this is amazing ina really subtle way, but amazing nontheless.
| b-U-b-TRUE 6/30/07 . chapter 1
I really like this. Nice metaphors, effective use of onomatopeia and repetition!
| vaudeville summers 6/30/07 . chapter 1
so different, but i liked it