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Piroko Hatake 2009-11-07 . chapter 27
Aww. That was cute and kind of sweet. I liked it.

Now I have to go brush my teeth.

XD
Mcbeff 2009-11-05 . chapter 27
Yay and update!

Hmm...Dex and Ash huh? Future interactions should be good. Can't wait for something a bit longer next time.
S. N. Sedivec 2009-11-04 . chapter 27
I'm so glad you're back. I was hoping this story didn't just die off.

I wish the chapter had been a little longer, but otherwise I thought it flowed rather nicely.
navigator101 2009-11-04 . chapter 27
I was delighted to find this update in my inbox this morning it was good. So we now have another name for Apollo that's neat. I love the reference to Ashely being tiny that was funny. He'll regret that one day. I had almost given up on seeing another update this year but you proved me wrong and I'm glad as this is an excellent fic and I love reading it. Please update soon! :D
XxSiennaxX 2009-11-04 . chapter 27
Thanks for updating again :)
I really liked the chapter and I'm glad that at least someone knows what she has been through and he seems quite supportive. Hopefully, unlike at the academy they won't continuously split her up from everyone she starts to care about.
Please update again soon
twinfeathers 2009-09-28 . chapter 25
It's a good story that both has a plot and different aspects that allow it to stand out from the other stories here but it would be helpful (to me, and some of my friends at least) if there was an index type thing that told names, what they stood for and why they got them and who they correlated to in the "real world" Also, this would go under the misc section on if you wanted to post it there, you might get more readers. Please update soon!
twinfeathers 2009-06-05 . chapter 26
It seems sort of Ender's Game-ish. It's really good but I just wanted to comment on it.
Piroko Hatake 2009-05-24 . chapter 26
Sorry it took so long for me to review. Anyway, I LOVE IT TO DEATH. I CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE!
Uncertain convictions 2009-05-18 . chapter 26
yay! It was so good!!
navigator101 2009-05-18 . chapter 26
I was so happy to see this in my inobx! I love teh nickname for the prince as well as the fact that Ashely bugs him. I also loved her seeing a familiar face and seeing Dark reminding her of Apollo. It's obvious she misses him a good deal. No surprise there I hope we get to see him again soon as I really miss him.
XxSiennaxX 2009-05-17 . chapter 26
Ohh loved the chapter. I can't wait to find out more about this new place.
Please update soon! :D
Vampireangelz 2009-05-08 . chapter 25
Wow. Im amazed. And extremely addicted. What happens next? I cant wait to read more. Keep it up :)
cajun-cuteness 2009-04-04 . chapter 25
Wow. This all feels like an alternate reality thing. It's confusing, but grabs you tight!!
Ice 2009-04-01 . chapter 25
Argh! And the conspiracies keep coming! For goodness' sake please finish the story. I can't take much more suspense!
Excellent as always tho.
navigator101 2009-03-30 . chapter 25
I was so excited to see this in my inbox when I went to email a chapter of one of my stories to my friend! I can't believe she's finally graduated! I can't wait to see what happens next although I really do want to see Apollo again. I'm sure you'll get there in Due Time!I hope the next update won't take as long but I understand that real life can interfere. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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