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Love this! It's sweet and sarcastic and funny in a not-so-funny way.
Write more!! :)

I love this! It really felt so REAL, reading it. I like the way things suddenly snap back into reality, cos it's sad, but that's life, that's what happens. But there's beauty in between few fleeting moments of happiness, still. (: Loved it, kep writing!

I like the stream of feeling that this expresses. It guides the reader along second by second in emotion. Not just detail, but with specifics and the feelings that are elicited from them. Well written.

what to say? i liked this one because the "cut" part was creative and the picture of two people lying on the beach is like imprinted in my mind. great job!

Haha! I really liked this. Well written and funny. Great work.