Omg I love it it is so cute, I just wish there were more chapters to follow their raletionship, and while Trisha and Hannah were stalking Avalon, I thought that Isaac was gunna come up and the instead of stalking Avalon they would be spying on their date, that would've been adorable... But regardless you story is still amazing and you did an awesome job!

This may be the inner writer in me, but I have a sneeking suspicion that the whole "Hannah-stealing-Jake's-first-kiss-in-front-of-his -crush" event will come up again in later chapters.

Loving this so far! Off to read some more...

I really really liked your story.

This story was amazing... please continue

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I can honestly say that I was completely giddy reading this story. In fact, I continued to giggle whenever Hannah and Jake got closer and closer together that my entire family gave me the evil eye and left me to my own devices. I just could not stop reading this story and after reading "The Metamorphosis" and "The Genesis" I felt my heart going out to Hannah and Jake. I can't wait to read more!

Ahhhh I've been waiting for this day forever! so excited!

Loved it. I really do loved it all.

Oh my God... you got plagiarized?! People nowadays have no respect... I'm sorry to hear that. Hope it doesn't happen again...

By the way, I didn't know there would be a sequel to Hannah and Jake.. this is so awesome! I'll check it out! Can't wait... :)

I'm still interested. So, yay!

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Nice!
I like how you showed the different ways to look Hannah' s friends, and I like every section about Jake's feelings for his ex. You really added depth with those details.
Each main character's relationship with Isaac grew, and that was fun to read!
If I may, the things I would suggest you look at again are the words "blaring piercingly" and the placement of your introductions to family and father issues. The information itself is great, but maybe some of it should be sprinkled around instead of sitting in paragraphs into themselves, so close to our getting to know the Jake/Hannah banter. Sometimes that comes across as a dump heap of development.
Thanks for publishing this story on here, so I could read it!

I believe I've read this story years ago, but I must say, I enjoyed it immensely. Again. Good work and keep writing!

Such a cute story! Very well written :) look forward to reading more of your stories, keep up the awesome work :D xx

Wow one chapter and I'm already in love with this; that's one sign of an awesome story and amazing writing.

On to the next chapter!