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| Sally Can Wait 2008-06-28 ch 13,  | abuseWah! You had better update this soon. I need to know what happens. D: And yay for Flo Rida! ..Or whatever. That song is oh so catchy. xD Sally |
| Sally Can Wait 2008-06-28 ch 9, | abuseBAYLOR! Sic 'em, Bears! Wow, I'm totally wearing a Baylor shirt right now. Even though I don't go there. And probably won't. But still. xD Yay! |
| Sally Can Wait 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI really want tater tots right now. :) |
| BubblyLychee 2008-06-16 ch 13, | abuseI love your story! I stared it this morning, and I couldn't stop reading! I read through lunch even! Your characters' reactions, emotions, and situations are completely believable. Please update soon, and not make Jake still like Mercedes! P.S. I want to know his 'deepest darkest secret' so badly (Maybe he tells Hannah it's that he likes her later! I can hope)! ~Katherine |
| First to Never Know 2008-06-01 ch 13, | abuseI'm loving this story. You're a really good writer. I can't wait to read more. |
| All The Rest 2008-05-28 ch 13, | abuseThis is written so realistically that I actually growled when Jake thought about how much Hannah sickened him. I mean...have some compassion! Well, that aside, this is one of my favorite stories, and I dearly hope you update. Best of luck, and keep up the awesome work! ^-^ |
| StarEyed14 2008-05-27 ch 13, | abuseOH MY GODD! I love this story. I couldn't stop reading until there were no chapters left. That's why I didn't review sooner. You HAVE to update. You must!.. at lease so that I can stay sane. lol -Great Job StarEyed14 |
| instantvoodo 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseCool. |
| JusticeWriter 2008-05-09 ch 13, | abuseAw. I love it. |
| substitute angel 2008-05-05 ch 13, | abuseThis was an entertaining chapter. Very easy to relate to being a girl, lol. Btw, Jake gets more loveable with each chapter. He's a total sweetheart. Good characterization and the chapter flowed nicely. |
| Flawless Soul 2008-04-25 ch 13, | abuseWow! Great story! Keep writing, please! And also, please, please, please update soon! I want to know what happens! |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-04-23 ch 12, | abusePS I'm watching the NBA play-offs as well. It's too bad my Houston Rockets will get swept by the Utah Sucks...I mean Jazz.LOL Go Rockets&Spurs! |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-04-23 ch 13, | abuse“You wanna drive down to the ghetto? We’ll find new girls there.”-Not sure what to make of that comment...is it offensive or not? Anyway, I had a story similiar to this awhile back but the roles were reversed. Also, my characters wenren't enemies. I'm not acussing you of anything because though our stories are similiar in content, the writing is way different. I'll send it to you sometime or I just might repost it. I LOVE Rascal Flatts. Hannah+Jake=LLOVE |
| Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abusewow i love this... much as you'd think it's a fairly common idea it's really interesting and addictive :P .dc. |
| Veronica Kimble 2008-04-20 ch 13, | abusewow. its been a while since iv read this. its realy good. i wonder if jake will ever like her, cuz the relationship isnt progressing that much (with exception 2 the kiss) hehe. x |