|Reviews for The Apocalypse|
| silentscream4luv 1/9/09 . chapter 21
really loved it...great story..
| brushstroke 1/9/09 . chapter 21
I loved your story! It was so cute!
By the way, it was surreal seeing references all over the place to the dayton area. You talked about Vandalia and Trotwood and the Fairfield Mall...crazy. I was expecting a visit to Bill's Donuts down in Kettering, or the Oakwood Graeters' ice cream, or a lame light show downtown at Riverbend.
SO weird. Anyway, peace out. Great job with the story. *grabs Jake and runs toward a place with handcuffs*
| caelynne 1/9/09 . chapter 21
-sends rounds of applause to Weeping Duck-
Congrats for finishing! Wow, I thought this story was amazing, and I'm kind of annoyed at myself for not noticing this earlier.
I think you really developed your characters really well, especially in a third person portrayal. Though, I'm just a little peeved about how Hannah was in love with Jake before she got amnesia. In the few years back of Hannah's reflection, I more expected Hannah to be strong-willed and not even like Jake at all, let alone confessing it in her diary. I would have much preferred if the amnesia changed both characters to, not realise their feelings for each other,but develop feelings for one another. That way, I think, it'd be more credible and more of a change from the cliche plot with the two main characters who've hated each other for most of their life.
I loved it however :) And thanks for putting so much effort in writing such a wonderful read. I'll check out The Brat Pack when I'm not so busy... now back to the tennis, I go!
| Joanikens 1/9/09 . chapter 21
i love how quickly you update! get chapter
| Dances-With-Pen 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Aw, done already? Well, it was a very good ride. This story was a very fun read and I enjoyed the characters. Hannah's awesome, and she reminds me of this girl I know with the same name. Girls in stories should always kick ass like that. Jake was pretty cool too. I'm gonna miss this one.
| goldenspork 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Aw, this was a really good story! It was cute, and the whole Jake realizing how he felt about Hannah was pretty realistic, too. :P I'm sorry I didn't discover it sooner.
| OrangeSodaRocks 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Aw, it's over! I'm so glad that you allowed a happy ending. Haha, you and your sad stories! ;)
Jake and Hannah are so sweet together, and I really feel like they've come far from the beginning. Talk about some extreme development. You showed their progressment so well! You also created a cast of great supporting characters (Tisha, Isaac, and Brent are incredible!).
I absolutely loved the plot line. I loved EVERYTHING about this story! And I can't wait to see what else you impress me with. :)
P.S. I LOVED the stalking bit! Haha, fellow stalkers unite!
| Writing4Eternity 1/9/09 . chapter 21
| flawedxu 1/9/09 . chapter 21
ah, it's over! I absolutely loved this story, and the ending was great. I'm so glad Jake and her are finally together, together. lol. Took a long time, but finally. Great story, I'm definitely going to keep up with your new story now.
| dust and glitter 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Ahh, I'm sorry, I don't think I reviewed the last chapter? Grr. My bad. I've just swapped internet browser back to Mozilla from Safari. It's a pain :(
ANYWAY, a review from both chapters:
Previous: AH. DYING FROM THE LOVE. WISHING I HAD SOMEONE RIGHT ABOUT NOW. The fluff, I love it (: One thing, at one point, when you've got Jake lying beside Hannah, you've said "he lied down beside her" or something. I think it's meant to be "he lay down beside her" ? I'm not sure... Double-check? ;) Still, amazing though.
Final chapter: OMGZ. THE LOVE. I LOVE THE LOVE. I LOVE THIS FINAL CHAPTER. I LOVE IT. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. You've done it so perfectly, so wonderfully. It fits well and it's just... amazing. This story is seriously wonderful. Congrats on finishing, you're an amazing author and I hope you keep writing :)
Well, I'm switching to The Brat Pack now :) See you there ;D
| JusticeWriter 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Dude, I love you! This chapter totally rocked! Seriously!
| kaw97 1/9/09 . chapter 21
That was a great ending! Although I didn't realize it was going to be the end, so I was very disappointed. I look forward to The Brat Pack.
| CATpuccino 1/9/09 . chapter 21
aw... is it finish now? officially?
weeww. it was sweet and GREAT.
| DuchessYappingDog 1/9/09 . chapter 21
Ah! These two little nincompoops are finally together! It really makes my insides feel fluttery and happy. Agh! Sigh. Kiss kiss, hahaha.
| JamieBell 1/8/09 . chapter 21
Aw! So wonderful! And I love blunt people. I wish I could be like that. There was a girl in my class today that was like, "Can I sit with you girls from now on-every day? I have no friends in this class." I just grinned and was like, "You rock! I love blunt people who just say what's on their mind." And I wish I could do that, just say what I feel when I feel it and not be scared. That would be a good way to be. So here I go. I love this story. It's wonderful, it was well-paced, it had a good plot, and just funny. I loved it! I love it. :) I'm sorry it's over, but thank you so much for sharing your talents with us! :)