| Reviews for The Apocalypse |
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lovefromjuly 9/8/11 . chapter 21Unpredictable ending to an unpredictable story! So much different to the usual ones I read. Absolutely fantastic :) |
lovefromjuly 9/8/11 . chapter 16This had me all in a frenzy! Everything towards the end was just too cute.. I can't even explain! Haha. It gave me butterflies and giggles. |
lovefromjuly 9/7/11 . chapter 6Hi! So... Please don't hate me for saying this, but I didn't really admire Hannah after she got into the accident. Mainly because of how she thought of her friends. I mean, yes, they may seem annoying, but she was friends with them for a reason, you know? I kind of got annoyed at her for that (hope I wasn't being offensive, I'm trying to say it in the most constructive way possible). Anyhow, this chapter totally made up for it and it's really cute how Hannah's so oblivious to the fact that she and Jake weren't friends. My favorite scene was definitely at the end :) |
peanuts and paydays 7/24/11 . chapter 21So this was insanely wonderful. Great plot idea, great characters (I especially loved Isaac!), and great writing overall! The whole amnesia thing really stuck out to me too; I've never read a story about a girl losing her memory and a boy helping her out.. even if he was trying to get her off his back at first. Jake and Hannah are much too adorable. I have to admit the whole "I hate you" cliche's my favorite, heheh. So it was definitely a pleasure reading the way you wrote it- especially since you wrote it in a good way. There are far too many fics where I can't stand the characters and the usage of that cliche. There were times when I felt weird by Hannah's behavior, but it was all probably due to the fact that she felt confused and weird as well, and plus, she had amnesia. I kind of wish there was an epilogue of some sort, but the ending IS perfect the way it is. Anyway, this is definitely going into my favorites and I'll be sure to check out some of your other work :) -peanuts and paydays |
chantellovesya 6/16/11 . chapter 2This chapter made me tear up a little. :'( |
Ivix 6/13/11 . chapter 21I reaaally loved the story. It's just great ) I'm sad its over |
Kaleidoscope World 5/7/11 . chapter 16I love this chapter :" great story! :D |
LissyGirl 4/21/11 . chapter 21Ohmygoshh! This is so cute so far! i just started reasding it today! Aw! I can not wait until their mothers find out!:D sososo cute! Update soon if you can!( -Lyssa |
Dill Wilson 3/30/11 . chapter 1Jake is a moron, but its still a fun story - frustrating at times because Jake just doesn't get it, but a nice redemption and second chance story. |
MuffinsRoxSox 3/25/11 . chapter 21THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! (the ending) The story itself was lovely to read. It was definitely more fun than homework, that's for sure. Tisha is cool. I like her. :) My friend painted my nails turquoise in first period this morning. But it got messed up because we were trying not to get caught by Coach Steiger. He made me late to second period. :( that was completely irrelevant. I'm sorry. Anyway, that was great. :) |
mylittlePRINCESS 3/1/11 . chapter 21best story ever love it |
Bubbly Girl 2/27/11 . chapter 21Cute story! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) Bubbly Girl |
DorkExpress 12/21/10 . chapter 21Awesome story dude! XOXO |
Robin 10/28/10 . chapter 1 AW... the beginning was really slow but then toward the middle, the story started picking up pace and jake FINALLY started to admit his feelings for hannah; so in the end all I had to say was FINALLY lol. |
maybealoveletter 8/26/10 . chapter 21Loved this story. Too cute. I just read on your profile that there is going to be sequel? Can't wait, if so. ) |