Reviews for Before the Cliff - FictionPress.com

gnomesbeatfaeries 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseShort, but still moving. I like how even though you were in front of the void, the void still seemed to come between you. If I may draw a metaphor, it's almost as if the couple had a big decision to make, a something life-altering coming, and that draws a wedge between them. What a personal poem, its pretty much something everyone can connect to! michelle
Chidori Nadare 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is a nice poem. It has that gothic-like elements in it. It's written in an interesting way. The choice of words was great. Although I'm not sure what happened in the last part. Good job! -C.N
Daughter of the Faeries 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseThis was a great poem. I am not sure I understood exactly what happened in the last line or so, but the way it was written was very interesting. The poem reminded me of something from a gothic romance (think Emily Bronte), particularly because it had the feel of a tortured soul and the imagery of the cliff. Great job! Daughter of the Faeries