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| kiki 2007-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease update. |
| ... 2007-10-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseWOW. That was seriously good! please update. I admire your use and knowledge of mythology... so far it seems to add. and I apologise for ruining the review page with this crap. |
| Kyrina 2007-10-15 ch 3, | abuseim very impressed by this story ... haha tho it dont take much to make me impressed, but i like the colourful and descriptive words you use. |
| Niki Lemonade 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really well done. I've been on a bit of a Greek mythology binge lately, and I've been looking for a new story to get addicted to! Lucky me, I found both! Can't wait for more! |
| TakaShira 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThe summary got me, despite the spelling mistake, yet here I am because it sounded really interesting. I think the 'she'd live to regret that' and the 'sibling rivalry' caught my eye. Usually I go straight for the romance category and nothing under 10,0 words yet here I am, once again. The first line, about the Mission Impossible theme, that was the hook right there for me. I do that ALL the time, which is great for all the odd looks I get from people when they see this girl with a mohawk, or today I just shaved it all off walking calmly or whatever else I'm doing humming that damn song. It's addictive I swear it. Except was used in the first paragraph and I don't know why but I expected it to be misspelled, well done with the pleasant surprise on that one. Rayce is a nymph, hm, interesting. Sizzling pig flesh? That was fun, interesting way to make bacon seem creepy. Lol. or "-jug of pulpy juice from it's icy prison" it's cool how you can take everyday things and make them new and amusing. Thoroughly impressed here. I absolutely love this story actually, "Vengeance shall be mine, but for now, I must have orange juice". All because you have some of the while moderately used but witty aspects in here. It's nice to see a new and original style of writing out there. The banter back and forth between the two characters is great! You know I don't think I've left a straight positive review in sometime, I'm either loosing my touch of death or you are just that freaking good, I like to believe it is the latter. |