I adore the concept behind this. The way that it is voiced makes the reader feel that the important things in life, dancing, writing, singing should be contemplated and elevated rather than passed by in a rush to get to some other time filling nothing that does not quench the soul. This has a self actualizing aspect that grabs the readers attention, and says this is what I should be doing rather than the drudgery of repetitive everyday life. Cheers for the stop and smell the roses, or in this case drink the champagne freely, concept. It has been expressed well here. Marvelous work.

This gave me a taste for champagne. :)

I can't connect the third stanza to the rest of the poem thematically, but it does have nice diction and format.

Good write!