does alex have a job or go skool like uni cause he is always at home. cant wait till chapter 15

is it finished? i hope not

jeeze her life suks aye?

Write more soon!

loved it can't wait 4 the next chapter

i like it update soon please.

haha i like the relationship the alex and aria have together...

Alex is getting soft now. He keeps talking about deep feelings and stuff and it's just making him seem soft. It's starting to lose the hardcore edge it had in the beginning. And it's going really fast.

I'm still enjoying it but it's just my personal preference for male characters who don't go soft.

I'm really sorry if this is a completely useless review or if it offends you in any way shape or form, but... I have no clue why I love this. I dunno. You really got me. You mentioned typos, but I didn't notice any, or at least any to distract me from this really intense action. I mean when people write sex scenes they can seem so played out and seriously suck butt AND they lack any sense; the only thing going on is sex. But this had sex AND a relationship, and you did it without any background or anything. This is great. Hell, I haven't even read anything else and I'm favoriting this, this is awesome, I swear I thought I was the only one who ever thought this kind of story would be cool, but you posted it and like haven't got it hidden in the back of your closet and I love that hahaha.
I dunno, I just really liked it. It's intense and emotional and kinda just plain weird so far but what the hell.

But the one thing that bothered me was how she (here and in the summary) says that being 15 makes her hateable. I dunno, maybe you go on more about it later but a 19 year old hating a 15 year old just because she's younger is kinda unbelievable. It's not enough to foster a real loathing, is it? I dunno, it killed me when I read that part where you mention it. Alex says he hates her and doesn't even understand why or something to that effect, which is more believable than just "I'm 15 and he's 19 so he hates me." It's like, is she immature or what? Y'know?

sick, man- sick.

if ur not in2 itnt slang i meanz wuunderful.

or am i just being sarcstic?

muhahahaha...

I think what you need to do is to describe the setting in more detail and earlier on. It was a bit vague where they were and all until a lot later. The other thing is you should show why he hates her instead of just saying so. Things happen for a reason, even if it may sound silly to others, there is a reason. Things feel a bit rushed, especially the action later on. Maybe you did want to portray the pace, but I'd still work on it.

IS THAT ALL?!
IS THERE GONNA BE ANOTHER CHAPTER?
CHAPTER 15?

ah...it's so addictively perverted. Nice. (:
I usually don't like most lemons or anything like this but...you're good. Keep writing. Update soon.

please add more this stpry rockx

Hey!I really love your story! It's a shame you haven't updated in so long.Please keep writing!It's really good!x