I like this. Unique, intriguing and of course, it's humor. The 'sorry' in the end, adds a personal touch. Well done and I'm putting this at my faves.

-C.N

P.S I didn't notice it. Thanks for the review and for the fave (again). I appreciate it a lot.

It's unique and intriguing. Nice work.

Funny and easily relatable. I loved the ending.

I like this. It reminds me of something kind of horrific for some reason. Like a scary freaky clown like IT or something, but I know you didn't write the poem to be like that, its just what comes to mind for me. I love the "sorry" at the end. Its just meant to be there. Great job! Thanks for the reviews!