Wow. Beautiful ending. Good descriptions of the poison in the veins. I like the words you chose to use.
"Bloodless
But pure once again." I really loved that.

Kayleigh

I really like how you used poison as a metaphor for love. That's what love seems like anyway.

Wow, you're a great writter. I love the way that you make your poems happy then sad. But that's awesome.
Thank you for your awesome reviews too, they make me happy.

ttyl

Great Job!