This was a very interesting style of writing; it's very unusual. I liked your take on the fairytale. It was unique and somehow wistful.

Oh, I clap aty this one. It was a smart way to invision there meating and how to portray such emotion into such little amount of writting really well done. Very enjoyable. Off to read your other stories.

~Obsession

The formatting of this was weird, but it seemed to fit with the story. It was short, but just long enough. I really enjoyed reading it.

- Koki

It was very good. And short. I like short for when I'm bored.

This is really interesting. I like how you sort of have the points of view of each of the characters. The short precisness of the lines are effective. It's almost more of a poem than a story. Good job!