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| Koki Enwai 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThe formatting of this was weird, but it seemed to fit with the story. It was short, but just long enough. I really enjoyed reading it. - Koki |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseIt was very good. And short. I like short for when I'm bored. |
| Alexandria Biddle 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is really interesting. I like how you sort of have the points of view of each of the characters. The short precisness of the lines are effective. It's almost more of a poem than a story. Good job! |