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Reviews For: Conversation in the Dungeon

Koki Enwai
2008-08-07
ch 1,
abuseThe formatting of this was weird, but it seemed to fit with the story. It was short, but just long enough. I really enjoyed reading it.

- Koki
Riley Hunter
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseIt was very good. And short. I like short for when I'm bored.
Alexandria Biddle
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is really interesting. I like how you sort of have the points of view of each of the characters. The short precisness of the lines are effective. It's almost more of a poem than a story. Good job!
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