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| Error-Author 2008-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseAh that was lovely. Sanguine and beautiful. In a strange, sad way, it completely fufilled my morning (which has been rather pointless so far). I fail completely at doing one-shots. They always morph themselves into novel-length plots I fail at finishing. You know, I won't be able to get this piece out of my head for ages now. Not that it's a bad thing, but I was supposed to be working on my own stuff today. I fear I might be distracted now. But really, what a beautiful piece. Real gems on Fictionpress are few and far between and this is one of the diamonds to me. It goes on the list to join the limited others. Now I'll have my hands full coming back to read more of your work. XD Alas, poor Malleo. :'( It's the mark of a fabulous writer to pull people in so far they end up hurting for the little fictional people- or merepeople. Kudos and hats off to you! Check your mail for a giant box of cookies. |
| TwilightZelda 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was so sad. A good short story. I was able to tell a lot about Morgan before the story ended. Lord Jade was an asshole. I wish I could have known more about Malleo but oh well (I'm too used to reading lengthy stories). I love how you put a good servant in there and the description of Malleo sounded nice too. |
| Daydream Nation 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful.. I loved the concept of the story and the tragedy of the ending. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, my God! This is just so beautiful! I loved it, and the ending made me like really cry, you know? This was really awesome! T^T |
| Lerene 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat a sad ending :( |
| Let. Me. Fly. 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWow that is original stuff. All the better. |
| The ReTaRdEd Penguin 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseomg, im about to cry. that was so sad, but so good. i loved it. |
| Vera Dicere 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abusei hope you know i wanted to cry reading this. but that's not such a bad thing, i promise. 'twas very good. i loved malleo and morgan is such a sweetie. i do wish there had been more happy malleo/morgan times before the end came for them, but i enjoyed it nonetheless. :) |
| Khali Draegan 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseokay finally got around to reading this lol its just because im sick...heh but i liked it! lucky birthday girl gets a cool sad mega-awesome oneshot O.< likey likey |
| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuse...T.T Well written, and the end just left you with that -sob- feeling! -sob- Real creative, keep up the good work! |
| Rachel 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseKATY >:O DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN! I loved this story so muchthough omg |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThere's just one thing that is more beautiful than well-written slash romanticism - slashy angst ! And, I love 'em even more when they're well=written !! Fabulous story, and I love the ending ! |
| lilylupin7 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAw I figured there'd be a sad ending...but still :( A very good story though! |
| Amindaya 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThe depressing-ness is what made it great. :D I was like "Cool! Merman!" And then I was liked, "Oh, darn, that was unexpected," when he turned out to be a slave. And then I was happy when they were together, and sad when they died. So it was a roller coaster. Fun fun. |
| Love Eternally 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseok, katy, im gonna go cry now |