   Undrahas 2007-07-28 . chapter 15This was an awesome story! |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-07-22 . chapter 13OMG! Ihope Cage doesn't like break up with her! |
 aiurwaves. 2007-07-21 . chapter 13depressing, but good chapter.
Sorry it took so long to review.
I hope they find Adrian soon... dang it... this sucks =[
~ Miss Deelylah Rose |
 writing.life.2.4 2007-07-19 . chapter 12 sry too lazy to sign in... this story is GREAT! i was getting a little confused at the beginning of this and the first part but i think i'm understanding it now. keep updating because i'll keep reading! |
 Alice Heist 2007-07-16 . chapter 8haha, i like the chapter title. now, whenever I say stupid, I'm going to be like, "hmm, yeah, that is a dirty word..."
XD
anyways, what is the song title? just wondering. XD |
 September Sapphire 2007-07-16 . chapter 12aw! poor adrian! that sucks |
| aiurwaves. 2007-07-16 . chapter 12 damnit! god. poor, poor adrian.
update soon.
~ Miss Deelylah Rose |
| Undrahas 2007-07-16 . chapter 12 poor Adrian. he feels so invisible, but thats a fact of life.
i hope he's ok, and that they find him before he gets killed or something!
this was an awsome chapter. |
 Onia Black 2007-07-16 . chapter 12ew
poor idiot kid |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-12 . chapter 11 WHAT IN GOD'S NAME! There better be a reason every time something goes good it goes bad! UPDATE! |
| aiurwaves. 2007-07-12 . chapter 11 GOOD CHAPTER!
One of the best yet... god Robert.. I can't express my hate for him even in words...
WHERE DOES ADRIAN GO?
UPDATE SOON!
~Miss Deelylah Rose |
| Onia Black 2007-07-12 . chapter 11 oh shit. |
| Undrahas 2007-07-12 . chapter 11 woah! the next promises to be good! |
 fire clan angel 2007-07-12 . chapter 10i hate youor cliffhangers |
| fire clan angel 2007-07-11 . chapter 9 do you know that meaning of writer's block? this great |
FictionPress.com - let the words flow