Woah, that was astonishing! The verses are detailed into beautiful scenes. I love they way you wrote it. Words can not describe how well you did with this! Keep up the fantastic work!

intersting, why did u use 2 am?

Great ending ... it sounds like intrigue. And it does that tone ever-so-well.

I love the alliteration because ... well, I just love alliteration period. But it's goodness. Yay!

Subject matter ... eh. Dunno if I, personally, find it to be such (then again, I live in the woods and there aren't any alleys or such ...), but it is nice. Sort of longing for more while knowing you truly want less. Less is more, sometimes, especially in poetry, so ... I'll give it an 8.5. Lovely, lovely.

Love,

Felicia.

I loved it. 2-4 am in the morning is the most amazing time of the day, I swear, and you put it all into the perfect poem for it.

Why is this SO good?

It's ammazzingg.

Love it.

Thanks for the read.

Truly enjoyed it. Obviously. :)

Wow...amazing. You painted an image in every verse, and it was wonderful. :) One of my favorite works out of you.