Great one shot.

I thought your narration was a bit choppy at the beginning but I think that's only because I'm not used to this style. I don't really like songfics, but this one was an exception. Good work, keep it up.

Favorite line:

"[...]because first love is true love, and true love lasts forever and a day." (It appealed to the romantic in me. ;)

-Bleep

i'm seriously crying right now! Make a happy ending!
^.^
Love u lots,
psychopaths

D: Poor Eric. Alcohol is a disease. It's not really his fault. Danny should've been more considerate...

:D Great story. Nice incorporation of the lyrics, by the way. :)

Oh-gods above.

I actually cried...well, teared up, anyway.

That's so sad.

I've been through that...*sighs* Sweet memories.

Well written, but a few grammar mistakes.

I liked the time breaks, though. That was a nice touch.

^^*

-Icicle Tears