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You Can't Make Me
Sun37Storm
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
i understand! this is very well written. good job! for some reason i love the lines "I’ll find someone new to hold on to" and "Don’t stand there like you’re so cool" it really stops the reader. keep writing!!
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