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| relapse into change 2007-11-30 ch 1,  | abusethis is one of the best pieces of poetry i ever read it's so amazing and gorgeous and wonderful imagery |
| saccharine lust aerial 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusea tumbling spiral (her pharmaceutical cocktail slams her apart) gorgeous |
| painting andromeda 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusejuice burns a path behind her lips I liked that. Stay well. Stephen |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseyou know, sometimes it worries me when people write things like this, but i write things like this too, and, you know, death is cult and philosophy and whatnot. the biggest topic since love. anyway. this. this was ** gorgeous. its like, they call it the modern day horror now, i suppose. the girl who doesn't eat and takes drugs and eventually kills herself slowly. its really sad, in a way. |
| miss apocalypse 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abusei really like this. it has a nice flow, and the phrases in parenthesis are especially good. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseyou remind me of somebody i used to know (in person.) good username. must read up on the rest of your work when am more cohernet- lots of interesting ideas and beautiful phrases flow well through. silly darling. i'm intrigued. |
| call me ish 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusei'm breathless and worried and my ** god you're amazing cassi. let's shake off the world and go to oblivion [some call it new zealand. girls like us right now don't need wings to fly but we'll get there quicker by plane] |
| Faith Adeline 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseAnother excellent piece. It's bitterly tragic and a little bittersweet. Keep it up. Faith |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseRemarkable, Enthralling, Amazing. This bites. |
| hail.the.bloocheese 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abusecompelling... i like your style. |