this is one of the best pieces of poetry i ever read

it's so amazing and gorgeous and wonderful imagery

a tumbling spiral (her pharmaceutical cocktail slams her apart)

gorgeous

juice burns a path behind her lips

I liked that. Stay well.

Stephen

you know, sometimes it worries me when people write things like this, but i write things like this too, and, you know, death is cult and philosophy and whatnot. the biggest topic since love.

anyway. this. this was fucking gorgeous. its like, they call it the modern day horror now, i suppose. the girl who doesn't eat and takes drugs and eventually kills herself slowly.

its really sad, in a way.

i really like this. it has a nice flow, and the phrases in parenthesis are especially good.

you remind me of somebody i used to know (in person.) good username. must read up on the rest of your work when am more cohernet- lots of interesting ideas and beautiful phrases flow well through. silly darling. i'm intrigued.

i'm breathless and worried and my fucking god you're amazing cassi. let's shake off the world and go to oblivion [some call it new zealand. girls like us right now don't need wings to fly but we'll get there quicker by plane]

Another excellent piece. It's bitterly tragic and a little bittersweet. Keep it up.

Faith

Remarkable, Enthralling, Amazing.

This bites.

compelling... i like your style.