this is one of the best pieces of poetry i ever read
it's so amazing and gorgeous and wonderful imagery

a tumbling spiral (her pharmaceutical cocktail slams her apart)


gorgeous

juice burns a path behind her lips

I liked that. Stay well.

Stephen

you know, sometimes it worries me when people write things like this, but i write things like this too, and, you know, death is cult and philosophy and whatnot. the biggest topic since love.

anyway. this. this was ** gorgeous. its like, they call it the modern day horror now, i suppose. the girl who doesn't eat and takes drugs and eventually kills herself slowly.

its really sad, in a way.

i really like this. it has a nice flow, and the phrases in parenthesis are especially good.

you remind me of somebody i used to know (in person.) good username. must read up on the rest of your work when am more cohernet- lots of interesting ideas and beautiful phrases flow well through. silly darling. i'm intrigued.

i'm breathless and worried and my ** god you're amazing cassi. let's shake off the world and go to oblivion [some call it new zealand. girls like us right now don't need wings to fly but we'll get there quicker by plane]

Another excellent piece. It's bitterly tragic and a little bittersweet. Keep it up.
Faith

Remarkable, Enthralling, Amazing.

This bites.

compelling... i like your style.