First off, I just wanted to say...
Black cherries!

** yes.
XD We have such excellent taste in story titles!!


But I haven't read it yet - so I'll go do that now.

for my own personal curiosity i want you to write a sequel. but then again i feel that you shouldnt write one, the ending was just to perfect. rarely do i find good endings. as you might have guessed, endings are my favorite part of the story, and i love yours. (:

It won't let me log in.But i really think this is a great story long as it is.

This was the single most useless piece of writing that I have ever encountered in my sixteen years of life on this planet. My IQ dropped significant points while reading this..."story" if you can even call it that. Your characters were pitifully one-dimensional, your writing style was reminiscent of the that of the fourth grader I tutor, and nothing about anything caught my attention.

I highly advice you go and seclude yourself in a corner of the largest desert you can find and save the rest of the world the misfortune of coming across your vulgar writing.

Thank you,
Omurice.

Wow that was one long story! But I liked it.

I love it but it makes me feel angsty. The beginning symbolism sort of tells me that Shiva has given up and accepted his current situation. The ending confuses me as to Anubis feeling hope but hope for what?

Ok , I have never heard of Forever Moribund and aam going to assume its another fic, but this piece of work that you've managed to finish is breathtaking. I really love the way its told, and I'm sure if i had ever been acquainted with FM it would hae been perfect. As a stand alone, its a really great fic. uch respect to the ending, alopt of folks try and fail to get a hopeful but not corny ending so Kudos.

This story was breathtakingly beautiful. I hope you'll do a sequel or something, because I'm close to tears right now and I want to see a happy ending.

I have to admit, I was a little confused with the past/present breaks in the "chapters" until about halfway through the story. Took me long enough, huh? But, once I figured it out the story was ten times better.

Please, please continue the story; I loved the hopeful ending with the butterfly, and I hope that Anubis and Shiva get a happy ending also!

*munching on cookie* Mhm, cookie~

So not qouting Homer Simpson. So not. ;)

Anyway, I have to say this one thing about this piece: I love it. Yes, simple as that; I'm head-over-heels with this piece, it just really appeals to me.

'cause it's slash but not overly romantic and it's supernatural and, yeah, everything I really, really like all rolled up into one nice package.

To be honest, it's that and more. You're descriptions are just superb; you're writing clear and elegant and I'm envious of it; and I adore the style you chose to deal with this. Like you're starting from the beging down with the numbers; it's fantastic.

Also: I'm in such a big puddle of fan-girl goo that even I can't stand it.

Lovely work. Truly an amazing piece. Iloveit.

- Noelle

Holy Crap!

This is awesome--a story with pro-anarchy (and obviously you know what it really is and don't just use it as an excuse to sit around and smoke altogether too much weed) and anti-marriage sentiments...it's really cool that you can support these concepts without going on a incoherent diatribe. I really hope you continue this...

Yay cookies! *eats*

Ahem. Yes. More son! Will there be more? I will be very sad if you leave them all unhappy like that... Tragedy is a -human- art form, after all. Eh? Eh?

AH...I love this. So much. It makes me happy and sad and kind of want to beat Anubis over the head and hug him at the same time and just AH.

This is the sort of story I wish I was awesome enough to write.