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...Uhm...why does this end with a question mark? =D

I think this should be under poetry. Hehe. Okay, the real review...

I think with this piece, you are trying to evoke emotion, but honestly, I don't feel any. No offense. =D Maybe that's because you don't have any dialogue. I just wish though that you put 'more' into this work of yours. You did a good job here, recounting all the experiences your character shared with another unknown character. It's nice that we get to see a full-glimpse of her mind and all the swirling emotions she feels inside her. But like I said earlier, it's lacking. I just wish though that you put more into this. I know, and I'm very sure that you can do much more. =D

Also, I had a hard time writing a review for this one. It is extremely short that there are no mistakes (at least none that I saw). I can't give you constructive criticism because you are perfect when it comes to your grammar. I can't crtique on your plot and your characters because this pice of yours is too short. So yeah, writing a review for this one was real challenging. LOL. ;p

Truthfully, they wouldn't be ready for the emotions and would only hurt you again. But overall, about the poem, I like the words and the impression they leave you wondering with. Each line holds an expression of anger, hurt, curiuosity and lingering care. That want to trust that person once again but afriad they'll only prove your inner suspicions right.

Normally I hate putting nicely done or nice work, because it sounds so faliciously congradulatory, but in this case I'll put it. Nice poem!

~Mosaic

Good job. You're certainly letting whoever this is directed towards have it. (I'm always a fan of retribution and vindication.) (In regards to the other poem, I simply liked it because of the way your phrased it. Paths of writing, very true with the different types and different ways of pursuing it.)

Nicely done... Makes me wonder who it's directed at... heh

This is a very interesting piece, it intrigued me in regards to the story behind this poem. Well done :)