"He was the only star I truly wished upon

As he crashed into my life."

this poem was certainly better than your most recent one

perhaps, tragedy is what you need to keep the fire in your words.

Peace&Love

-N

ps, I hope you didn't take anything I said the wrong way, I was just being honest and trying to help you grow into the writer you can and might want to be.

Omigosh this rocks! Very accurate, good poem, keep up the good work!

This is brilliant. Great job