I can't tell where this is going to go, but the characters are starting to develop well. I like that Hayden and Mitchell are developing a friendship.

Livi

Quite humorous. Love the ending XD Very vague though. It's supposed to be vague, as I got it, but since the names of the characters are told, I feel like a little bit more about them could be revealed too. They're not just two figures in a conversation anymore when they are given names. The environment, actually the whole physical part isn't described either. At all. I would add to the suspense. Good job!

Ok i have it i should be hailed as the ruler of all. Well you wanted to know how to get Damien and Hayden started off together well i just finished reading the obsessions story and i reckon what you should do is put Damien in Baillie's position of being assaulted by his father (that's why he is such a prick) and you could get Hayden to like walk into the p.e. showers and see how he has been bashed up. Damien latter catches up with Hayden trying to convince him that it was nothing that he saw and then end up having a whole heart to heart thing, and wallah the starting of a relationship. lol I really astound myself sometimes. By the way i so do not think your stupid, your heaps better at the classification thing than me and you know it.
Besides how would i survive without the only sane person in the class. Now that was a major hint in who i am so I'm not gonna even bother signing this but i think signing it would have been quicker.
Tess.

Good story so far, update soon!

omgg...aahaha...i wrote this !! ok..im fine..im jst one of those people that get a kick out of seeing my name in a phone book so yerhh...im very excited !!

ahaha

latahz

OMG there's HENT within the story! Methinks the universe may just implode now!