I was intrigued by the title..the poem was really good. Especially lines 2-8, you had especially fabulous word choice there.
The way you continued thoughts from one line to the next was good too, it forced me to slow down and really pay attention to what I was reading.

I looked at your title, MOnterer et Etre, and I thought, to die and to be? I had to read this one! I like the way you broke the lines, it gave it a feeling like a tirade, very nice. The word pictures are very vivid. Well done!