love the story. update soon

wow! wicked awesum story! i was so confused in the beginning with the setting and their names but then read that thing you wrote about them being your own creation, Lol. Interesting name selection btw and i can't wait to read the next chapter!! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =]

ah i love your story its so vivid.
happy writing!

hmm...interesting. that's gonna backfire on her, it was very bitchy, she should've just done the assignment and gotten it over and done with.

wow awesome! i love the story please update soon!...and so far she's a ** ( sorry to insult your chracter) but i think i'm starting to uderstand her better...

i hope you don't get mad :)

i wish u luck on your writing!
A Dark White Rose

p.s. i'm hooked onto your story
p.s.s. so about the locatio and names it's like earth but a few changes or ...what?
p.s.s.s. sorry it tok me forever to review and stuff

...o...she's so ivil!

o, I am hooked! Update soon!

it's ok, it's ok. i forgive you, but please PLEASE review soon, i want to see what happens!

Captain Burger

o! you go girl! ha! that was awesome!

the only thing i can say is to watch for spelling. but it's really cool!



Captain Burger

heya, good chappie. can't wait to see how their meeting goes. cya later ~ Alenor.

hay, just want to say that i love this story and hope you update as fast as you possibly can!

Hilarous!

Keep it goin, I love it!

That was a bit short, but it was still good. I liked it. I can't wait to see what he does to her...or what happens next. Nice chapter, update soon :D

its funny. you should update soon lol

heya, this is a great chappie. i can't wait for more ~ Alenor.