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| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome inspiration! You are extremely talented! |
| recycle rhymes 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseinteresting imagery. love love the last lines. nice work. |
| Basara 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abusehahaha! sorry for the laugh... but this one's creative ( in my own opinion of myself at oddity's sake ) sweet! nice! |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseM ... tiramisu inspires me too. I love the expression "ladyfinger lust." |
| fairytale failure 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI love the power in the lines 'his fingers stick in her hair like cinders'. The first 5 lines seemed very real, down to earth and dirty. The last two seemed kind of magic. |