a very deep and heartfelt poem. some how...reminds me of something. can't place it though. GREAT WORK!

~Sorrow

I like this... the format is great and I love the ending a lot... great piece

ooh... this is a truly unique poem! i love it... the openness is beautiful. keep it up!

Wow, this feels very powerful. The way that you decribe it all, the beat of the poem is very fast, almost like panic or uneasiness? Well I like this poem.

Keep it up.

oh, how ...sad. *tear*