Sounds like something you'd think of in bad times...well done; it was a little long, but it got alluringly surreal at points where I'd sit and puzzle exactly what it meant. At times, this sounds like a poem translated from a different language. For example, the lines "All the animals are cheering constantly/This gives me a confident assurance" gives a very from-the-Japanese-y feel, combining a present-tense pattern with a cutesy little image of forest animals sitting on rocks and cheering you on.

I don't quite agree with the other reviewer that this should be a song, though. Mr. Sun would be pretty difficult to attach a tune to, but I s'pose I'm not the most musical soul out there...keep up the good work!

are you sure this is a poem? it sounded like an adorable song. good job