|Reviews for The Hunter|
| Maddie Fyrce 12/16/07 . chapter 12
i like boys in fedoras.
| Maddie Fyrce 12/16/07 . chapter 11
this. is. pure. talent.
i envy you.
this story is amazing.
| Maddie Fyrce 12/16/07 . chapter 10
omg. im SO sorry i haven't R&R-ed in forever.
have i mentioned i love this story?
i was trying to catch up on Constancy, too, but FP wont let me read it.
| Seline 12/11/07 . chapter 12
OMFG! I have little heart flutters. I... i am so confused on what is happening. Okay, maybe I am just being me. Scince you said you like ggod, descriptive reveiws I will do my best!
| Carmel March 12/6/07 . chapter 12
Oh, I'm in love with this story. It's been awhile since I've found a story that I just adored.
You've not only got beautiful diction and a way with words, but strong characters and a great storyline.
Keep up the great work :)
| Lucia 12/3/07 . chapter 12
I'm so used to our Julien...it's strange having him be all articulate and...erm...fully clothed...okay that last one was a bit of a stretch...Anyway!
I like the chapter. A little more description would be nice, but no need to be all like Selene or anything...I'll be eagerly awaiting Constancy, just like all your other loyal fans out there...and for those of you reading this review that haven't read Constancy...SHAME ON YOU! I will forgive you though if you do read it in the next couple of days or so...
Have a pleasant day, Vira!
| urbanfictionalist 12/3/07 . chapter 12
i liked it and the mysterious guy finally has a name. what happened to ricky? did he die in the car crash.
| urbanfictionalist 10/27/07 . chapter 11
OMG! what happened to ricky? is he dead? i really really hope not. i liked his character he was an alright guy but he would have just let amelia go with her friends none of ths would have ever happend. and is the person who got amy out of the car is he the same guy whos been calling her? I hope she's alright i really do. and i loved the story so far cant wait for the next update
| Lucia also to lazy to log in 10/21/07 . chapter 11
Amazing. Strange thing to name a vampire though. Destiny? I'm kind of leaning towards ironic, unless you were thinking something different...? I can't decide if I like your guy better as a hero or a stalker...because as you know, stalker is right up there with strangers on the best candy list...
It's amazing how much you can describe while still sounding scattered...though you do do that alot...I'm rambling now. So i'm just going to stop. Okay, have a pleasant day.
| ML too lazy to log-in 10/20/07 . chapter 11
Awesome chapter, Vira! Loved it! I love that song, too, though it makes me wanna cry.. I was listening to it earlier today, actually, but anyways. Might wanna tell people the title (which is "Angel" by Sarah McLachlan), though...
Can't wait for the update!
| KiraLove 10/20/07 . chapter 11
Wow, that was awesome. I was wondering through the first few chapters when it was going to start getting more like a vampire story. I just have one question. Were the two bumps really bug bites?
Please update soon!
| Shdwphoenix 10/13/07 . chapter 10
The relationships between Amelia and a couple of the other characters, namely Ricky and Norma, have developed quite nicely. I especially like how Amelia offers to spend time with her aunt to ease her loneliness. With that, Norma's not just "the interesting relative who conveniently provides the main character with a place to stay". She's more than a stand-in concerned parent figure (since Amelia's parents are off saving the world from mankind ;D ). She's family, a good friend, with fears and desires past skin deep.
On a similar note, I'm happy that Ricky's not the "hot guy who sweeps the main character off her feet at first glance". He and Amelia have followed a more gradual and logical path in their relationship, from coworkers to friends and only then to something possibly more. It's amusing how Amelia thinks she has herself convinced that she doesn't like Ricky, only to have her physical actions contradict that. Denial in first person is so much fun. Ricky's a sweetie.
All in all, great job on your characters.
And oh. Oh, man. Poor Ricky. You spend this much time making the readers fond of him, just to throw the boy into what is probably a fatal car crash? You are a cruel, cruel person. But in any vampire story where the protagonist makes contact with the namesake creature, that's part of the point, I suppose. And I think I can safely guess that this chapter is the official start of shit hitting the fan for this story?
In 'Prologue' and 'Phone Calls', I think you mean [hollow] rather than [hallow]. Hallow is a verb that has to do with honoring and blessing something, you see. XD Another typo I've noticed is [lightning] as in "thunder and", not [lightening]. There may be others, but I don't remember. If you need any proofreading done, I'll be happy to help. :]
Anyway, the story is just getting juicy, so I hope to see another update in the near future. _ Keep up the good work!
| Shdwphoenix 10/12/07 . chapter 4
There's some really excellent characterization going on here. Amelia's got a neat sense of humor ("Want me to grab the shot-gun?"); I appreciate good sarcastic remarks from characters. Even narrating something as trivial as sewing reveals tidbits about Amelia's personality. It's great.
I like the story so far even though we haven't gotten into anything involving vampires yet. I'll read the rest later; need to sleep.
P.S. Ah, you're a Naruto fan as well? :D
| Lucia 10/11/07 . chapter 1
I'm going insane. One, well for obvious reasons, and two, because you left off at a totally unacceptable part! I'm so disappointed in you. You just leave me hanging with her passed out in the car with a deadly temptress just waiting there for her? What is WRONG with you? But don't worry I still love you very much.
| Murphy's Lawyer 10/9/07 . chapter 10
GAH! MAKE IT BETTER MAKE IT BETTER MAKE IT BETTER MAKE - IT - BETTER!