I'm shocked into silence by your work.
I particularly love "perfection cannot exhale".

Ah, if only I had half of your eloquence ;)

Wow this is amazing. Really. I wanted to leave a review to match but that's all I can say really. Amazing.

while it was all very pristine- the last stanza was just gorgeous.

oh, icarus.
too late.
only diamonds are forever.

love the lines.

and i would totally buy your book. just that, im not exactly in your country.

the imagery in this is relentlessly powerful. after wading through vague, sentimental poems all day, this feels concrete and like something i can grab.

I. Love. This.

So raw and there's so much imagery, you have to read it twice in order to inhale it all.

Absolutley Amazing.


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This poem strangely mirrors parts of a novel I just finished reading.

The raw imagery and emotions, and the power behind each word - just amazing. You always manage to write such thought-provoking pieces and make it all seem so effortless. Take care.

I would review so much more often if your work was not too good for words. I can rarely form a coherent thought other than "wow" after I read one of your pieces, and that is not enough.

~j. lynn

ahem. i'd buy it. course, i'd want it autographed which means we'd have to see each other which means perfect reason for publishing. :D

as to this: mygod. i love 'i strike a match.' it's so...i don't know. it just is.