I liked most of it, the message is a good one. I think most people would be able to relate to things changing as they are growing up, I know I can. But some of your rhymes were a little distracting and felt out of place, like boozie.

Well, it was okay. The concept is really good... but I think your rhyming got in the way at a few parts. Personally, I like the A-B-C-B method of rhyming in poetry. Your poem does have a lot of truth in it about growing up. Good work.