This is a really powerful depiction of the world we live in; an excellent expression of the pressure I’m sure we’ve all felt at some point. I love it; very nice job.

yep. most teenagers are the same way. most girls listen to the mirror's lies...But then again the mirror never speaks. I think that girls just misunderstand the messages that the mirror conveys. I think it truly refracts to them beauty but it's all the perspective that decides whether beauty or ugliness is being reflected. That probably didn't make any sense...But even so, it's a good poem of a rather common topic these days. Good work. Keep writing!

I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. I like the idea but the words just don't flow with me...but sometimes that's poetry, right? Well, good idea and keep writing! Please Read and Review my story!! I need the reviews and Id really appreciate it. Its called "That boy on a bike" I really need feedback on it, because Im not that great of a writer. Thanks.

Until Always,
A-xx

I absolutely love this poem. I liked it how you did your breaks and the words that you used. Loved it!

-Sapphire