Reviews for The Alone Moments

simpleplan13 2007-10-23 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. its sad in the beginning but at the end it totally changes... I liked that a lot... the only thing. in the second to last stanza it seemed odd that you used could and then switched past tense, but thats prolly just me
Alison Wright 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseI love your last image: You could give me a rose And laugh as its thorns tear open my heart. Been there, done that, bought that t-shirt, it's been recently burned. :) I'd work on my yours and you'res if I were you. :P Good work. ~Lee
Hidden Lies 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseAww, so sad! You have expessed yourself really really well... long time now reveiw from me here! But I am back and I am bad! Hopefully I can start visiting her as religiously as I do my other sites! It just beautiful! Love always Me - Imaginge if we had to repopulate the earth... http://w.i-will-hide-forever.