I like this piece's shortness. It's short, but still manages to say all that needs to be said. I like how its a little bit mysterious at the beginning, but the meaning gets clearer in each line. Well done!

Wow just a lot of rhyming in this, I have to say perfect. Just all around good poem.

This is short, but none the less, very well written. I shall move on to more of your works...:D

Great rhyming scheme! I love the sexual undertone to the entire poem. In every line it gets a little more obvious. I really enjoyed this one. Good Job!
--Shookie

i truly like the meaning and concept behind it, but i'm not one for this kind of form.