"commenting/ at the especially interesting points."

Yes. Oh yes. I know. That's even worse than them standing there looking awkward, not sure whether to comfort you or not. To make you into a spectator sport...

Also love that last line.

I really love this one, too. I love the parallel to television and how it's like, "She's just a character. She's not real." That's how people treat others sometimes, and you captured that in this poem.

this is so sad, and almost seems like what would happen to a victim of bullying, where no one stands up for them cause they are too afraid or for some other stupid reason. good writing. :)

i Liked that one. my Understanding fell short in some parts. it was Very good anyway. U are the greatest.

That's sad... (SEE you write depressing things too)

I hope that is about your life, cause da'ling I would be next to you in a heartbeat!

It is powerful, the words you chose are piercing words, right to the heart, to our senses.

It's beautiful. It just clicked by me.